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Post by Deleted on Nov 12, 2013 23:46:44 GMT -5
ignatius robert rivers
CANON OR ORIGINAL: Original AGE: Seventeen FACE CLAIM: Justin Kelly YEAR: Seventh Year HOUSE: Ravenclaw OCCUPATION: N/A BLOOD TYPE: Half-blood WAND TYPE: 13', unicorn hair, willow PETS: an somewhat-dodgy owl ironically named Rex ABILITIES: None as of yet. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - LIKES: Potions class, reading, outdoor activities (including flying, bike riding, camping and swimming), listening to music. DISLIKES: Losing at anything, not being listened to/being interrupted, feeling dumb. BIGGEST FEAR: Dying alone PERSONALITY: - Arrogant
- Competitive
- Secretly insecure about a lot of things
- Intellectual
- Charismatic
- Broody
- Indecisive
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - MOTHER: Evelyn Darkwater (witch) FATHER: Hector Rivers (muggle) SIBLINGS: none HISTORY: Born and raised in London, his father inherited a private bus company from his father, so the family have always been quite wealthy. His mother made the best of her life, and his memories of her are all fond ones, but he can never recall really liking his father. His mother died in his first year at Hogwarts from a rare bone disorder which Hector refused to acknowledge properly, and Ignatius' rapport with his father suffered for it. They rarely speak now, even over the holidays, and Ignatius has started staying at Hogwarts instead of going home whenever he can. They have often clashed on everything from sports to whether or not Ignatius is actually his son (he is, but Hector doesn't understand how the magical genes are passed). Ignatius attended a private all-boys school until he came to Hogwarts. As a result has a fairly inflated ego and can be quite judgmental, traits which have not endeared him to the students and staff at Hogwarts, for the most part. He found early on that he exceeded at Potions, and spent his loneliest days around the grounds reading books on the subject for fun. He also enjoys Charms, but doesn't seem to have any real knack for it. He has tried out for the Quidditch Team several times, but so far has been unsuccessful. He has a few acquaintances, but no one he would truly term a friend at school. He mostly socialises at meal times and during class, then doesn't know how to push the conversation any further. He has discovered that people will listen to him if he speaks authoritatively, but he generally lacks the confidence to actually try to lead anyone. Despite his potential, he has never really thrived, but that has begun slowly changing since his 5th year. He began making an effort to speak to people and come out of his shell, which has had mixed results, leaving him confused as to what type of person he really is. As a result, he most often tries to be polite and friendly, but occasionally gets overly sensitive and withdraws over small things. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - HEY MY NAME IS NELLIE, AND I ALSO PLAY NO OTHER CHARACTERS HERE. I FOUND THE SITE THROUGH THE PROBOARDS ADVERTISING TOPIC.TEMPLATE BY ELIZA @ SHADOWPLAY & RCR
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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2013 11:06:30 GMT -5
pending
hi there! well, basically you have a good base here. However, I have a few issues with this, if you may help me fixing them. Firstly, the PB you've chosen is a little too old to play a seventeen years old. I have a general guideline on PB choices, they should be no bigger than 10 - 12 years differences between character and his PB. For example, your PB is 32 years old, he can play characters between 20 (minimum) and 40 (maximum) years old. Suggestion is that you pick another PB who would be fitting to play Ignatius. And second, you may need to give your character a middle name too. I've fixed your application coding, however I can't help you fill out the section where I have no information for. You would need to fill in his first middle and last name below his image. (: Also, this isn't something big, but your Alias meaning the name we should know you by around the site. You can choose to be called Ignatius too of course, but in case you want us to know you as your own nickname, you might want to fill in something different in there Once you've done editing, please give this a bump so we will look through him again. PS: And as said, I've fixed up your application coding, you may use the BBCode tab to edit when you do, so not to mess up the coding again. Also, a side note is that your character display name should be showing all FIRST MIDDLE LAST, all capital.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2013 18:59:13 GMT -5
Bump! Thanks for the pointers, can't believe I didn't notice the 'first middle last' section.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2013 19:28:47 GMT -5
accepted
Thanks for making the suggested edits, he is all set to go now. welcome to wands at the ready, do remember to post your claims, and have fun around!
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