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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2013 7:24:19 GMT -5
i Kaiden Elliot Aritza
ORIGINAL:AGE: sixteen FACE CLAIM: Patrick Schwarzenegger YEAR: sixth year HOUSE: Slytherin OCCUPATION: N/A BLOOD TYPE: Pureblood WAND TYPE: Neverlanding 10 1/4 yule wand dragon heart string PETS: Black scruffy dog called Mr.Clooney ABILITIES: N/A - - - - - - - - - - - - - - LIKES: Reading Qudditch Dueling Cooking DISLIKES: Admitting defeat Being judge quickly Birds Allowing himself to be exposed BIGGEST FEAR: Flocks of birds PERSONALITY: Kleptomatic Good sense of humour Hard working Arrogant Cheerful Good at duelling Overpassionate Short-tempered - - - - - - - - - - - - - - MOTHER: Stephanie W. Artiza FATHER: John J. Aritza SIBLINGS: None HISTORY: Kaiden was born on November 22nd, he was born into a rich family, his mother had inherited her fathers wealth and started her family off very well. As a baby, his father left him as soon as he was born so he didn't know his father very well. Kaiden childhood wasn't a bright childhood he and his mother was always constantly abused by his mother's boyfriend. Kaiden always got sick of being verbally and physically abuse he often squabbled with his mother but she was too scarred to do anything. Kaiden had to learn to survive on his own because his mother neglected to look after him only because she was too weak and tired from all the abuse she was getting. He quickly had to learn to cook for himself, to clean up the house by him self. He eventually had enough and started rebelling out against his mother and started stealing other stuff from the shops even though he could've brought them. At age 11 Kaiden received a letter stating that he was accepted into Hogwart School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He couldn't wait to go to Hogwart, he wanted to go so badly but unfortunately his mother wanted him to go to Durmstrang which he didn't want to. After convincing his mother to change her mind he finally won and his mother took him to the diagon alley to buy all his school supplies and showed him stuff beyond his imagination. During his stay at Hogwart, Kaiden wasn't very popular at Hogwart, no one really liked him and picked him almost everyday because of his fears of birds and because of his intellect, he was almost always the top of the class. Kaiden is a quiet person and didn't do much in his Hogwart years, he spent most of it in the library studying or in the dueling room, fighting everyone and almost winning every round with some quick thinking. Which didn't help with his reputations. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - HEY MY NAME IS ANDY, AND I ALSO PLAY Kaiden Aritza. I FOUND THE SITE THROUGH Puddifoot Top Sites Harry Potter.TEMPLATE BY ELIZA @ SHADOWPLAY & RCR
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Post by Deleted on Nov 13, 2013 20:31:13 GMT -5
*le bump
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Post by Deleted on Nov 14, 2013 11:32:54 GMT -5
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hi Andy. Firstly, welcome to wands at the ready, Kaiden is pretty well written, there's just these few issues I would like you to fix before I accept him. One- Your application is not posted in the correct form, which I would request you to copy the Traditional Application code again, and then paste the filled out information you have over here to there. The form should not appeared to be centered, look out for that too. And a small tips, make your edits over the "BBCode" tab would prevent you from messing up the codes without knowing. Two- On the basic information on top, you need to fill in whether your character is CANON OR ORIGINAL, which judging by the last name, I think Kaiden is an Original character. And you will also need to pick a house for him, ask around, flip a coin; just set on one, you can have one at another house later, we allow a player to take multiple characters here. Three- I would need his father's name, regardless whether Kaiden know of his father or not, you will need to give us a name, which might work for perhaps later plot usages/ reference. Give this a bump once you've done the necessary edits, and we will look through him again.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 14, 2013 19:30:59 GMT -5
le bump*
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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2013 12:20:06 GMT -5
accpted
thank you for making the suggested edits, and for your patience, he's good to go now. Do remember to do you claims and have fun around. <33
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