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Post by Deleted on Nov 15, 2013 11:19:58 GMT -5
Zoey Rosaleigh Bell
CANON OR ORIGINAL:Original AGE: sixteen FACE CLAIM: Emily Kinney YEAR: sixth HOUSE: Hufflepuff OCCUPATION: N/A BLOOD TYPE: Muggle-born WAND TYPE: a maple wand. The length is twelve and three quarters inches long. This wand's core is merfolk hair. PETS:fairy (a stray cat she begged her father to let her keep) ABILITIES: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - LIKES: Plants, Charms, watching Quidditch, reading, singing DISLIKES: hights, people, wild animals, BIGGEST FEAR: wild animals PERSONALITY: Shy but friendly, Odd, fun, clumsy, kind - - - - - - - - - - - - - - MOTHER:Jasmine Ann FATHER:Andrew Riley SIBLINGS: Anthony Jaden (twin/ muggle-born), Oliver James (16 /Muggle) Sofia Jaylee (19/Muggle) HISTORY: Zoey and Anthony were born to their parents as the third and fourth children of their family early on an April morning. Anthony had been expected but Zoey had been a surprise not only to her family but to the doctors as well. Growing up they had all the love and attention they could ever need. Though there were differences in how Zoey and her brother acted and grew compared to their older brother and sister. Strange things always seemed to happen around them. And, there was something different about them that no one really understood until the twins turned eleven years old. On their eleventh birthday the brother and sister got an unexpected visitor from Hogwarts. No one in their family was really sure about what Hogwarts was how it worked, or where the twins would be going off to. But all of their family was excited for them except for their older brother who was jealous that the twins always got the attention. When it came time to say good bye for the year Zoey couldn’t wait to get on the train, but when she saw all the people on platform nine and three quarters she half hid behind Anthony fallowing him with a slight bounce in her step. The two twins stayed together until the sorting hat called Anthony’s name. As he had seen others before him do he went and sat on the stool as the hat was placed on his head. “GRIFFINDOR!” it yelled. Now it was Zoey’s turn she shyly stood in front of all the other students as the hat was placed on her head as she longingly looked towards her brother. But the hat did not utter the same word as it had with her brother. “Hufflepuff” it yelled instead. Fear filled the small girl as she walked to the table with all the cheering students who seemed happy to have a new member in their house. Over the years being in separate houses put space between the two twins and slowly they stopped spending as much time together making Zoey feel alone yet content with herself. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - HEY MY NAME IS Kayla/Zoey, AND I ALSO PLAY No one. I FOUND THE SITE THROUGH ANDY!.TEMPLATE BY ELIZA @ SHADOWPLAY & RCR
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Post by Deleted on Nov 16, 2013 1:07:07 GMT -5
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she looks nice, though I have two issues that I would love you to edit before we accept her. One- Well, the character is fourteen years old, but the PB is 28. While she has a young look, we have a general guideline for the age difference between character and the PB. Generally we goes by 10 - 12 years, especially for younger students. If you may change your PB (or you can change the character's age). If you need help looking for a PB, feel free to ask, I've already several candidates who looks rather alike Emily Kinney who you're using here. Two- Muggle-born children don't get their Hogwarts letter by post (unless they have prior knowledge like Harry's aunt and uncle do), they would get a visit from the school's professor who would be there to explain the school, the wizarding world, how to get their child's item (or maybe even escort them to Diagon Alley) and how to go take the Hogwarts Express... to them. If you may edit and perhaps add more on that. Give this a bump once you've done editing, and we will look through it again.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 16, 2013 11:46:50 GMT -5
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Post by ADMIN EMILY on Nov 17, 2013 14:14:55 GMT -5
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Sorry, this is me being super, super picky, but since this is an easy application, I'm going to be extremely detailed about this. In the personality traits, you need at least five. So if you could just add another one, I think that'll be it and she can be accepted
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2013 21:47:35 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Nov 17, 2013 21:57:57 GMT -5
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sorry for the wait dear, and thank you for the patience. she's good to go now. do remember to make your claims and have fun~!
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