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Post by Deleted on Nov 24, 2013 14:16:46 GMT -5
Alec Demetri Stebbins
CANON OR ORIGINAL: Canon AGE: Fifteen FACE CLAIM: Josh Hutcherson YEAR: Fifth year HOUSE: Ravenclaw OCCUPATION: N/A BLOOD TYPE: Halfblood WAND TYPE: 11 inches, Thestral tail hair, Holly PETS: White male cat Celeste and beautiful barn owl Basil ABILITIES: Half vampire, and animal affinity - - - - - - - - - - - - - - LIKES: His pets Reading Violin Piano Singing Nighttime Vanilla DISLIKES: Liars Bullies Being bossed around by mean people BIGGEST FEAR: Fear of being alone forever PERSONALITY: Intelligent Musical Loyal Protective Stubborn - - - - - - - - - - - - - - MOTHER: Lucy Parker FATHER: Conner Stebbins SIBLINGS: Only child HISTORY: Alec was born as an only child; his parents are Connor and Lucy Stebbins. He was born in Doncaster, England.He was always different from other boys his age and one day asked his parents why. They told him that he came from a family of wizards and vampires (Mother a full vampire). The day he turned 11 he got a letter telling him that he had been accepted in Hogwarts.His parents were very happy that their only child was a wizard. They quickly went to Diagon Alley to get him to the needed supplies for school, as his parents were getting his book he went to look at the pets. He already had his cat Celeste, but he wanted an animal that would allow him to send letters to his parents. He finally found a beautiful male barn owl, he begged his parents to let him get it. They finally agreed, believing that it would be a great way to stay in touch. The day finally came for him to leave for Hogwarts; he was excited but really scared at the same time. As he boarded the train he waved goodbye to his parents. He looked for an empty compartment, but had to settle with sitting with a boy alone. He set his owl cage on the seat and put Celeste down to explore. The boy eventually spoke up and said that his name was Alexander.They talked for a long time; he found out that Alex’s family was all Slytherin and that Alex was hoping that he would be two. When they arrived at Hogwarts the sorting began. Alec was sorted into Ravenclaw; he smiled as he joined his fellow Ravenclaws. He watched as Alex was sorted, he was sorted in Slytherin. Alec was gloomy about it but decided that they could still hang out together.His first year went extremely well, he excelled in Transfiguration, Potions,and D.A. He needed some help in Herbology, Charms, and History of Magic. His summer was peaceful and he hung out with his best friend, Alexander. He was glad to come back for his second year, it went by very quickly and he was sad to leave. This year he excelled in Potions, DA, Transfiguration, Arithmancy, and Ancient Runes. He still needed help in Herbology, Charms, and History of Magic. Thanks to the help of some friends he excelled in other classes as the years went by. He is now starting his fifth year. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - HEY MY NAME IS ALEC, AND I ALSO PLAY NO ONE ELSE. I FOUND THE SITE THROUGH AN AFFILIATE LINK ON ANOTHER SITE .TEMPLATE BY ELIZA @ SHADOWPLAY & RCR
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Post by Deleted on Nov 24, 2013 19:51:07 GMT -5
I need help, should he be Hufflepuff or Ravenclaw???
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Post by Deleted on Nov 24, 2013 20:19:01 GMT -5
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hello there! I rather like Alec in general, however here are a few things I would like you to edit before we accept him.
First and foremost, I hope that you can help to edit his name. Cedric Diggory was killed in Harry Potter's era, and due to his story being so clear cut, with Cedric the only child of Amos Diggory, there's no way for us to fit in another Diggory at this Era, sad as it seems. You may, of course get someone who's similar to Cedric, if you like his character personalities, but the name has to be different. That said, his parents' name should not be Diggory's, and it will be appreciated if you add in his mother's full name.
Second, if he's a half-vampire, he won't be a pureblood. Half-vampire, like many other half-creatures, were once being considered as abomination, not a full wizard.
Well, I hate to pick it out, but mentally speaking, a children would seldom being afraid of his mothers, regardless what they discovered their mothers are being, sometimes a child would even aspire to be like his mother; that's the general case, I am just pointing out. His mom being a vampire however, would probably has the side effect where she can never go outdoor in day time, possibly making him a joke for the neighbor's child, and if he lives in a Wizarding village, that might result in him being feared and the target to pick on if the truth about what he is leaked out.
Trolley led me to think of the snack trolley the train lady pushes up and down the aisle selling sweets. I believe empty compartment would be the word you're looking for?
And why is that? Did he gets help? Did he study a lot? A little bit more over here is appreciated. And as for him being animal affinity, won't that makes him good at Care of Magical Creature too? And a little more explanation on where he got that ability of his would be nice.
Last, your application is not posted in the right format, would love you if you can re-copy the original code, paste it here and copy your entry over. Remember to make your edits in BBCode tabs so it would mess up the code again. Also, his image is supposed to not exceed 400px wide. <33
Give this a bump one you've done editing, and we will look him through again.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 24, 2013 23:52:24 GMT -5
How do you make the picture smaller?
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 8:59:01 GMT -5
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Hey. Hmm, I see that you did attempt to edit, but it is still not in the right format, the right one should look like the post HERE. Can you try to copy and paste the code again? As for the new character you wanted to take, I am sorry to tell you that the Malfoy's son is already taken. Perhaps you would like to check out out canon list, within which you may find all the information about which canons are playable, age, house and for some even names. And to resize image, you can try to use image editing options from sites like photobucket.com or i mgur.com; otherwise, you can always search for a new image on Google with their search tool. Again, please give this a bump once you've done editing. Thank you.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 17:36:14 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 21:42:29 GMT -5
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The application format, i fixed it for you. You would still need to add in information for the last sentence, where it ask for your alias and such. Do remember to switch it to BBCode when you do your modification. Give this a bump once you've done. And by the way, please refrain from posting in any section, including games and claims before you're accepted.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 22:12:46 GMT -5
Bump!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 22:30:15 GMT -5
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Thank you for your swift edit. be sure to post your claims and have fun!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 25, 2013 22:31:04 GMT -5
Ok, thanks!
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