MARIUS ABIAH HAWTHORNE

[MARIUS ABIAH HAWTHORNE]

marius abiah hawthorne

CANON OR ORIGINAL: original


AGE: twenty-four


FACE CLAIM: wes bentley


YEAR: n/a


HOUSE: slytherin alumni


OCCUPATION: Azkaban Prisoner


BLOOD TYPE: pureblood


WAND TYPE: willow, dragon heartstring, 11 inches, unyielding 


PETS: black vipor


ABILITIES: legilimency



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LIKES: fruit, rainy weather, knives


DISLIKES: people, love, happiness


BIGGEST FEAR: relationships


PERSONALITY: sadistic, cruel, bloodthirsty, antisocial, intelligent

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MOTHER: jezebel hawthorne    


FATHER: omar hawthorne


SIBLINGS: elysonya hawthorne


HISTORY: The year was 1997 Marius Abiah Hawthorne was born. He was the youngest in the family his sister Elysonya was the oldest. The mother and the father Omar and Jezebel Hawthorne knew their second born child would be destined for greatness. Abiah the middle name of Marius was given by his father. The name Abiah is the name of Omar's father. Omar thought his middle name would bring honor to his family. However Omar would soon find out that his son would be much much more capable of other things.

At the age of eleven Marius attended Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He was a very intelligent student for his age. He could read a text in a book and remember it all when the tests came and he didn't even have to study. He didn't have any friends mainly it was because he chose to be alone. Alot of students at Hogwarts envied Marius's abillites that he was often bullied by them.

In his third year of Hogwarts he became interested in Potions and Legilimency. He checked out about four books on potions and Legilimency. He finished the books in about a week due to the high interest in those two subjects.He had his own chemistry set on which he used and became an excellent student in Potions. His teachers were very astonished of his Intelligence.

However....a darker side of him soon started to build up inside of him as he went into his fifth year. He soon started to get fed up with the other students bullying him and making fun of him. This made him desire the lust for vengeance. He started to study more dangerous spells especially the unforgivable curses in the restricted section. This became his new interest...interests for revenge.

Finally as he was in the boys lavatory one of the bullies came in...this was what Marius was hoping for. As the bully walked up to Marius and began messing with him and challenging him Marius got an evil smirk on his face. He turned around pointed his wand at the bully and casted Pertrifcus Totalus. The bully was knocked down by the spell quick as a bullet. He lied on the ground as if he was frozen.

Marius's eyes widened in shocked at the aftermath of the spell. He immediately ran out of the boys lavatory and proceeded to the boys dormitory...he was never caught. He could not stop thinking of what he had done. He continued his studies on the dark arts which was his new fascination. Finally he wanted to test the spells.

He found a spider in the forbidden forest to test one of the unforgivable curses on. He pointed his wand at the spider but he stopped himself. He knew if he did this he would land himself in Azkaban. So instead he let the spider go and walked away slowly back to the castle. Inside he felt frightened plus an adrenaline rush which made him feel good about himself knowing he was about to use a unforgivable curse.

Marius later graduated Hogwarts at the age of 17 however Marius still had a fascination for the dark arts and still studied them. His family felt he was a low life for studying such dark magic. They soon felt he amounted to nothing and treated him like a slave. They made him do all of the house work and treated him poorly and cruelly. He soon got fed up and went crazy he finally got his wand and casted Avada Kedavra on his whole family in one single spell.

Marius disappeared in the night living on his own from now on but after the murder of his family he wanted to do more.Pretty soon at the age of Twenty One his killing spree began. He went around killing numerous amounts of people with a single killing curse. The wizarding world was in a state of shock and fear. Finally he was caught by Ministry Officials at his trial Kingsley Shacklebolt, showed no remorse for Marius and sentanced him to life in Azkaban where he remains today.

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HEY MY NAME IS LUKAS, AND I ALSO PLAY NO OTHER CHARACTERS. I FOUND THE SITE THROUGH GOOGLE.

TEMPLATE BY ELIZA @ SHADOWPLAY & RCR

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Okay, a couple of things involving the coding:

1) You need to post a 400 X 300 image at the top.

2) The coding is a bit off. Make sure you are set to BBCode in your profile settings instead of preview. If you need further help, please PM Paige and she will help you line it up right.

Thanks, L.J.

[MARIUS ABIAH HAWTHORNE]

Ok I think I fixed the coding and I got a picture set up thanks for the feedback.

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It still looks very off. I recommend you PM Paige for assistance with this.

[ADMIN LACEY]

pending

Okay Lukas, sorry about this, but there's a few things I'll need you to fix up before I can accept this.

- serial killer is not an occupation. i understand that he is a serial killer, but under occupation the correct 'job' for him at the moment would be azkaban prisoner.
- your second paragraph begins "at the age of thirteen Marius attended..." but students begin school at Hogwarts at the age of eleven. this needs to be changed, please.
- 'which he created on his own felix felicis and love potions' is not going to be acceptable. felix felicis is a very complicated potion to brew and slughorn himself said that he only had one student EVER be able to accomplish this. i very well doubt, no matter how talented he was, that marius could brew the potion on his own. onto the note of the love potions there is only one: amortentia. if professors found out that marius had been brewing amortentia he would be expelled because it is a very dangerous potion; you should change the wording of your sentence following this one as professors could not know about his brewing of amortentia and find it 'astounding.'
- sectumsempra was a spell made by severus snape and no one (excluding the trio) knows of it, so marius could not perform it.
- it doesn't matter what the age, a person who casts an unforgivable curse lands in azkaban, so i suggest you rethink this. either marius was sent to azkaban at sixteen, or he didn't cast the curse until a later time. i cannot allow the simple destruction of a wand and expelling from hogwarts to suffice as punishment for an unforgivable curse.

once you make these changes please make me aware and i will take another look at your application. thank you!

[ADMIN LACEY]

accepted

Much better! Welcome to the site and don't forget to make your claims.