Lancaster,Remus Derek (done)

[REMUS DEREK LANCASTER]

Remus Derek Lancaster

CANON OR ORIGINAL: Original


AGE: Seventeen


FACE CLAIM: stephen james hendry


YEAR: 7th


HOUSE: Slytherin


OCCUPATION: N/A for Hogwarts students


BLOOD TYPE: Halfblood


WAND TYPE: 11 1/2 inches, Dragon heartstring, Cypress


PETS:none


ABILITIES: wandless magic, Non-verbal magic(



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LIKES:listening to the rain
Singing( doesn't singing often.It's one of his hidden talents)
Drawing
tattoos
smoking( he finds it fascinating to watch it move and change shapes.)

DISLIKES: Cigarettes( he hates the smell)
His father
being interrupted
potions (hes really bad at it)


BIGGEST FEAR:losing his eye sight


PERSONALITY: observant
closed off
loyal
a bit blunt
protective
shy
hard working
competitive
quiet
analyzing
dedicated
Ambition
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MOTHER:Marie Lancaster


FATHER:David Rivers( doesn't know him)


SIBLINGS:None


HISTORY: Remus was born to parents David and Marie. he only knew his mother. He was born in Britain but his mother and he moved to the states when he was still a baby. so he doesn't remember anything about it. His mother didn't talk about his father or her family. He knew that she had a couple brothers and sisters,but that was about it. He didn't ask much about it nor He did think about it much. He mostly asked when he was very young. When he got older he could tell that his mother didn't like talking about it for some reason. So he didn't ask her about it.
His mother and himself had to set some rules to help hide their magic,while they lived in the a muggle neighborhood. He had decent grades in both his muggle school, while he went there, and his wizarding school. He when to his muggle school until he was eleven then he started magic school,called Salem institute. His mother told him her own magic schooling a bit,since she was a witch, and helped as much as she could.
Remus was an only child.Though he never felt lonely,even when he was all alone. His mother and him lived on the east coast. They lived both in the wizarding world and the muggle world. He had friends in both worlds. he spent a lot of his time in the muggle world though. His life was mostly quiet and uneventful. He had decent grades in both his muggle school, while he went there, and his wizarding school. He when to his muggle school until he was eleven then he started magic school,called salem institute.The class that he did the best in was transfiguration.He wasn't the head of his classes but he also wasn't trying. He did liked to learn a lot but he wasn't going to over do it. even though he was known by his inner circle to know little trivia facts.
Remus got his first tattoo when he was fifteen . He tried to hide it from his mother, but she did find out. She was mad at first and he did get in trouble. He knew that he would but he liked the tattoo a lot. That first tattoo started his loved of art and tattoos. His mother told him, she wouldn't paid for anymore of his tattoos if he got any more. He had to work hard to paid for his tattoos. He came into his love of smoke around the same time as he love of tattoos. Near where he got the tattoos, there was a incense shop that once of his muggle friends parents ran. He spent a lot of time there, learn about incenses and on his down time, he lit incenses that he liked the smell of and watched the smoke raise from the incense.

Remuss world was rocked when he was sixteen years old not long before his birthday. He came home that day to find his mother dead. After freezing in shock,He did what he had been taught to next. He got in contact with the magical law enforcement. after that it was a bit of a bur for him. He answered the questions that they asked him. He met other members of the family because of needing to work on the funerals. since he was still underage, He was going to live with one of them.After some talking, He was going to live in Britian with his aunt and uncle.
Remus went thought a lot Cultureshock after moving to Britain. It took a while to for him to get use to everything. His aunt and uncle helped him as much as they could. the culture shock along with him dealing with his mothers death, he wasn't too talkative nor did he smile a lot. He had hard time with it all. He hated having to leave everything and everyone he knew as a kid behind. It was that fall that he started hogwarts. It was just before he was going to go to hogwarts that he found out what exactly happened to his mother. she had been killed by a rogue wizard but they hadn't found him yet. He wanted to go and find the man himself.
He was sorted into Slytherin by the sorting hat at hogwarts. His first year at hogwarts was the most confusing. He mainly stuck to himself. He didn't really make friends at first, but he did make a couple. he found a lot of people, some his year or just below and mainly a lot of younger students, stared at his tattoos.


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HEY MY NAME IS Deanna, AND I ALSO PLAY Louis Weasley. I FOUND THE SITE THROUGH I'm a member.

TEMPLATE BY ELIZA @ SHADOWPLAY & RCR

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hi deanna, I believe that this application isn't done yet, seeing how it broke off in the middle.

While we are at it, I've found several issues I need you to fix for me before I approve him.

1. your application is not in the right format, it would be lovely if you can recopy the original code and paste your information over. while you're at it, you may refer to this thread to learn how to set your posting default as BBCode, it will make everything easier for you in the future.
2. as of current, we have a ban on phoenix tail feather wands, please pick another wand core for your character.
3. looking through his likes and dislikes, there is a mention of him liking to smoke and yet he hates cigarettes, can you explain further on that in your history? As well as how he came to be in contact with smoking in the first place, and his love for tattoo. Does his mother knows of these? How did she reacts to them? Please elaborate.
4. you mentioned that he went to muggle school and at the same time magical school - which I am going to assume it is Salem Witches' Institute. I am going to assume that this school accept both males and females, however I am not able to allow Remus to attend both magical and muggle school at the same time. Like Hogwarts, Salem Institute should have their own schedule, and it would be overburden for a kid to attend both schools. As of that note, it might be hard for Remus to make friends with muggles too unless they are staying in a muggle neighborhood. However, how does he conceals his magic when he's there? Did the mother and son take precautions about what they can and cannot do while living in the muggle neighborhood?
5. And I am going to assume that his mother is a witch (you will need to specific on all those I am assuming, just saying), with that though, how did his mother died? Then how did he come to be in contact with his aunt? Then later how well is he adjusting to Hogwarts and Britain? Try to elaborate further, as well as give me more insight on his sixth year in Hogwarts, how did he cooped with being in a foreign land.

Once you've done editing, give it a bump. we will look through this again ASAP.

[REMUS DEREK LANCASTER]

I'm Done

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accepted

thank you for editing. do remember to make your claims now and have fun!