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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2013 22:21:13 GMT -5
Andrew Lorne Kentigern CANON OR ORIGINAL: Original AGE: Fifteen FACE CLAIM: Josh Hutcherson YEAR: Fifth HOUSE: Ravenclaw OCCUPATION: N/A BLOOD TYPE: Pureblood WAND TYPE: 9 3/4", Kelpie hair, Cherry PETS: Owl named Kent ABILITIES: Metamorphmagus - - - - - - - - - - - - - - LIKES: Reading, Riddles, Jokes using metamorph ability DISLIKES: Pretentious Slytherins, People who act like they don't know their lefts from their rights, Water monsters BIGGEST FEAR: Water monsters PERSONALITY: Smart, Friendly, Fun-loving, Serious about school, Joker - - - - - - - - - - - - - - MOTHER: Annabel Kentigern FATHER: Malcom Kentigern SIBLINGS: Kyle Kentigern (Younger Brother) HISTORY: Andrew Kentigern was born and raised in Coatridge, Scotland. At his birth, his parents Annabel and Malcom, who were both wizards, noticed changes in hair color, telling them that their son was a Metamorphmagus, just like his mother. At a young age, Andrew showed a knack for smarts and puzzles, often times puzzling his parents at what he really looked like by changing his appearance quite a lot. When Andrew was six, he was swimming in a lake. He was on the shore when a horse trotted up to him. He petted it and somehow got on it. This horse turned out to be a kelpie and quickly took off for the water. Andrew's father quickly saved him from it and ever sense then, Andrew has been afraid of water monsters. For three years, Andrew lived his parents as an only child. Soon, his brother, Kyle, was born. Andrew accepted his brother, and loved him. For his eleventh birthday, Andrew received an owl, which he named Kent, and his Hogwarts acceptance letter. Excitedly, he got ready for his stay at the most prestigious wizarding academy in England. When he was in Diagon Alley and recieved his wand, he was told that its core was kelpie hair. All he could do was fell the irony. When he got on the train, he made a friend in a boy named Jeremy Tenther. Jeremy was shy when they first met, but warmed when they found out they had a lot of the same interests. About halfway through the ride, Andrew began joking with Jeremy by changes his features. A few other kids were walking by and saw this. They laughed and called Andrew a freak. Andrew didn't let this bother him, knowing full well he could ruin their reputations easily. They arrived and went through the sorting. Andrew got into Ravenclaw, for his brains and cleverness. Jeremy was sorted into Hufflepuff. They still remained friends. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - HEY MY NAME IS MrCammaster4, AND I ALSO PLAY No one. I FOUND THE SITE THROUGH Pokemon Mystery Dungeons Beyond Link.TEMPLATE BY ELIZA @ SHADOWPLAY & RCR
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Post by ADMIN LACEY on Jul 21, 2013 22:33:16 GMT -5
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welcome to the site hun! before i can accept your application, i have a few things for you to fix up. - you don't have a face claim. you dismissed the picture and instead of stating your face claim you described his looks. on our site we require a face claim for each character so please choose one, making sure he isn't already taken on our claims list. - your history is a bit short. is there any way you can bulk this up a little bit? maybe explain why he's afraid of water monsters, explain how his parents met, or even just add in some random events that might have happened while he was at school the past five years. we're not asking for a whole lot in history but it should be at least 300 words as it states in the application and you're at 232. just let us know when you've fixed this up a bit and we'll take another look.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 21, 2013 22:50:08 GMT -5
Thank you I wasn't sure what you meant by face claim, but now that I know I'll get it done. Ill be sure to add to the history as well. Thanks again
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Post by ADMIN LACEY on Jul 21, 2013 22:53:05 GMT -5
Thanks hun! If you have any questions feel free to PM me.
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Post by ADMIN LACEY on Jul 31, 2013 11:52:24 GMT -5
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unfortunately you have exceeded the allotted time to finish your application so we'll be moving this to the archives. if you decide to rejoin us and submit this application again, please PM a staff member and we can move this application back to the pending board.
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