Greyback,Charlotte (done)

[CHARLOTTE AMBROSIA GREYBACK]

Charlotte Ambrosia Greyback Sixteen Halfblood Sixth year and slytherin 9inches hazels, dragon heartstrings LIKES: books making smoke rings making things with her hands music remixes dancing singing a bit DISLIKES: her family being threatened being compared to her father lairs rats BOGGART: losing those she is closest to. MIRROR OF ERISED: to open her own record shop PATRONUS: N/A ABILITIES: half Werewolf(does turn on full moon), wandless magic( will learn in ic) PERSONALITY: observant, nice,trickster, likes to mess with people, Doesn't care what others think about her,loving MOTHER: Belle Carson FATHER: Fenrir greyback SIBLINGS: other greyback, Marie carson age 6, josh age 10 , daniel age 11 PETS:a savannah f1 named George HISTORY:Charlotte is one of the youngest children of Fenrir Greyback  and the oldest child of her mother,Belle Carson. she was burn on June 1st. her mother named her after her great grandmother Charlotte but she was called by her nickname charlie or char a lot. she was a only child for a lot of her childhood. Her mother worked in a small shop for a while, before starting her own book shop when she noticed there were not book shops close by. This is where Charlotte got her love of books. her mother got her to love learning early by making learning very fun for Her. Education is very important to her mother and is now important to her too. apparently dated a bit but nothing worked out until her mother met her stepfather john. She has three younger step siblings. her steps brothers weren't coping well with all the changes. they seem to think that char's mom is trying to take the place of their real mom,which she isn't. this causes some tension between Charlotte and the brothers, which has led to some fights. this fights cause some tension between Charlotte and her stepfather. she is only close to the youngest,Marie. she wasn't really close to her other siblings, mainly because of the tension. her childhood was pretty uneventful in her opinion . nothing much happened until john came around. she was never really close to her father,fenrir, until she started Hogwarts, where she was sorted into Slytherin. She wasn't really close to John,her stepfather, either. she started with letters to her father. During her third year, she met her best friend. He may be part of the 'bad crowd' but they just clicked somehow and for some reason. They met in one of her least favorite classes. They didn't hang out much outside of class until much later in that very same year. She met her father in person a lot starting her fourth year. even after getting closer to him, she didn't like being compared to him. which happened more than she would like it to. She wanted to be seen as just Charlotte not one of Fenrir Greybacks many kids. though she was proud to be in the family that she was. it was in her fourth year that she started to question if she liked guys. It started when she developed a crush on another girl in one of her classes. she mostly tried to not think about that crush or the confusion it caused in her. She eventually made herself face it with a little help from one of her best friends. she decided that she still wasn't completely sure but she knew that she wasn't that interested in guys romantically. Her fifth year passed without much happening her opinion. she did date a bit, but not much. she hung out for her older sister,Deanerys a lot like always. she was close to her from the start of meeting her for the first time all that time ago. hey guys, my name is Deanna! and I am rocking it at 22 years old, role-playing for roughly 4-5 years i cant really remember years - so i'm pretty chill with anything. i'm in the centrel time zone, and hail from us so how about that! currently my character looks just like hanna beth merjos or so i am told! I found y'all at HOW YOU FOUND US and that's pretty awesome isn't it? I currently have other faces on here known as louis weasley and remus lancaster, so hit them up for plotting! anyways; peace my dears! ♚ Made by SYLVIA of SA and GS ♚

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denied

I am sorry deanna, seems like you've exceeded the allocated time to finish this application and I will have to move it to abandon now. That being said it doesn't mean that you can't still work on her while she's there. You've got a month's time from now before we will clear this off from abandon, so feel free to still edit your application and give it a bump once you've done with it, we will look her over again then.

[CHARLOTTE AMBROSIA GREYBACK]

Done ~ hope everything's good

[MOD BONZI]

pending

Hey Deanna, there's just a few things that need clearing up and clarifying and then I think Charlotte will be good to go!

• Some how your coding has gone a bit off. I would suggest re-copying the code (here) and cutting and pasting the sections you filled out. I would also make sure you are in the BBCODE tab not the Preview
• Unfortunately Kaya Scodelario is unavailable as she is in use by another member.
• You list Charlotte as a werewolf, so I am going to assume she has been turned was this by Fenir? Or is she a Half-werewolf, and if so does she turn like a full werewolf or is she non-transformable? If you could expand a bit on this trait of her's in her history, it would be appreciated.
• You say that she isn't really close to the members of her family or her step-father, is there a reason for this?
• You mentioned how she started writing letters to her father in her first year of Hogwarts, what changed after 11 years of not being close to Fenir that made her want to seek some sort of relationship with him?

Just give it a bump once she is ready for another look!

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denied

hey deanna, it seems like you've exceeded the allocated time to fix this application. I am moving this to the abandoned now. You will still have a month's time to fix things up and give your apps a bump once you've done so we can take a look at her.

[CHARLOTTE AMBROSIA GREYBACK]

done

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pending

hey deanna, you have a general good base there, however there are three things which Bonzi has pointed out and yet i don't see much changes them. Would appreciate you to make suitable edits before we approve her.

- As you've listed Charlotte as werewolf, I would assume that she is a full werewolf, as you've not mention how she was turn (was she bitten) or if she turns on a full moon night at all. She should be a half-werewolf if she's Fenrir's kid, and half can turn into a werewolf during a full moon nights too. I would need you to further elaborate on how she's turn and if she turns on a full moon night (if she's a full werewolf) or you to list her as a half-werewolf if her ability is inherited by birth.

- Well, you've mentioned that her being werewolf makes her not too close with her family, but what's the reason behind that? Is she afraid of hurting them? Or she was simply being boycotted by her siblings because she's a werewolf? Being a werewolf doesn't mean you can't get close to another, in fact when it's not full moon night most werewolves behave like a normal human.

- On the same point, I wanted to know are her siblings her mother's and John's kids or they are John's kids with another woman who come in and live with the family after her mother married to John.

- So you have not further elaborate how Charlotte comes in touch with her father, like how did she gets to know him? You can't just write to someone because you want to, you will have to know where he lives and even if he's alive and well outside instead of sitting in the prison rotting away.

Give it a bump once you're done and we will look her through again.

[CHARLOTTE AMBROSIA GREYBACK]

bump